i hope denny isn't taking this as an offending, as i respect him and love his work very much. also that he considered doing this, is much much appreciated. i mean, where the heck can you get an alonzo figure?
although i have to say, that the sculpt is a let down for me, as i had (maybe too) high expectations. when i look at the morgan freeman sculpt, the bale sculpt, neo, etc,... this sculpt here doesn't reach that high level.
i don't know what it is, it's the combination of a lot on the sculpt that doesn't work together.
1. the head is just too small
2. the eyes are looking wrong
3. mouth/lips have a wrong shape, and they aren't pronounced very good. maybe it's just the painting he has these edged lips, don't know how to discribe.
4. the shape of the head looks for me also wrong. the forhead is curved here too much inward, and is too small.
5. and like my buddy tbay said, those puffy folds aren't helping at all
i'm not a good photo-editor, but i tried this out quick. maybe i'm alone with my thoughts, but i've tried changing these parts, that i mentioned. on the right side you're seeing the edited version, the left side is the original sculpt.
there is still much more to be done, and the edits can be done also much better than i've done, but these are just my thoughts for denny. and again, i hope you don't take this negative. i'm just trying to motivate you to be better and better